Friday 27 May 2016

Reflection Week 4

Numeracy- This is my Numeracy. We had to use screen castifiy to show our learning and I learnt what 5x29 is. All I did was find the closest tidy number witch would be 30 and then I new that 30x5=150 so if you take 5 off 150 it would be 145. Also for Numeracy I have done 2 other activities they are using rounding and compensation. This is my work. Next time I am  going to work on Saying what I am actually doing on screen castifiy. 


  



Word Work- This is my word work learnt how to spell Geography.

M  a  n  a  g  e
10 5 10 5 10 10= 50

M  a  t  e  r  i a l
10 5 10 5 10 5 5 10 = 60

G  e  o  g  r  a  p  h  y
10 5 5 10 10 5 10 10 10 = 75

D  e  c  i  d  e  d
10 5 10 5 10 5 10 = 50

c u l t i v a t e = 50
10 5 10 10 10 5

r e p r e s e n t a t i v e
10 5 10 10  5 10 10 5 10 5 = 80

G  o  v  e  r  n  m  e  n  t
10 5 10 5 10 10 10 5 10 10  = 85

A  n  t  a  r  c  t  i  c  a
5 10 10 5 10 10 5 5 = 85

R  o  u  t  e
10 5 5  10  5 = 35






Reading- This is my reading Follow up I learnt that punctuation can save lifes and now I can use punctuation in my writing more than I already do.


Writing- This is my writing I learnt how to write a report. I wrote an artical here it is.
Mr Zuckermans Miracle!
It was a cold frosty misty morning a miracle had occurred in Mr Zuckerman's Barn. Wilbur was happily and grubly eating his food when he could see something glistening in the mist it was a web, but not just any web it had words in it SOME PIG Wilbur thought that's weird.

He carried on eating when Charlotte raced up to him and said “ did you see my web “ Wilbur replied
“ Yes “ and then Mr Zuckerman walked into his big red barn WOW!! He didn't know what he was seeing he thought he was either dreaming or just seeing things.

He walked closer to the web “ this couldn't be true” he thought. After Mr Zuckerman and Lurvy spent 4 hours just staring at the web Mr Zuckerman took a look at Charlotte and  then Wilbur and said this can not be true. Charlotte was laughing in her head she had tricked a human being!! She was so pleased at what she had done to help Wilbur now he might not die!

He went to the President to tell him the amazing miracle that happened in his big red barn and he told the that their was a message in the web called SOME PIG he also told the President not to tell anyone because the only people that know about this are Him the President Lurvy and Mrs Zuckerman.  He was so sure that he had the most amazing pig in the world when Mr Zuckerman and Mrs Zuckerman went home the President followed them so he could take a look for himself…

4 comments:

  1. Ella you have been working hard this week! Your Charlotte's Web writing is very detailed, next week we will look at turning it from a narrative into an articles. Maybe have a look at the Grey Star to see how an article is structured.

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  2. Hi Ella its Tess from Paroa school, you have did a great job on your writing it has a tone of detail and is very creative.
    Thanks!
    go check out my blog tessb@blogspot.com

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  3. Hi Ella it's Mya from paroa school,
    you have done a lot of work great story check my blog out here's the link. http://myama7.blogspot.co.nz/

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  4. hi ella its sophie from paroa school your writing is great and creative go check out my blog http://sophied7.blogspot.co.nz/

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