Reflection W1 T3

Last week were were working on writing an argument. We learnt how to cause cause and effect to grab the readers attention. We had to work with a buddy to write 3 good paragraphs about our topic witch was why we should have a phone. I also wrote a descriptive piece of writing about a picture that I found. Here are me and my friend Kaedes Paragraphs and my writing.




Series of Paragraphs (including topic sentences)








Imagine if we were in separate towns and there was no way to communicate well a phone could solve our problem. It would be really good to be able to keep in contact with my friends and family. Like if I went somewhere with my friends and I needed you to pick me up somewhere I could just text you and tell you where and what time. Also If I wanted to sort something out with my friends I could just use social media as an easy way to communicate with them.



Having a phone will cure my boredom forever! It will cure boredom most of the time Because, If I went somewhere and had to wait in line or wait somewhere I could just play on my phone. Also if I am bored at home and it's a terrible day, I can just play on my phone instead of moaning to you! Plus there will be a lot less arguing in the house if I had a phone.



You would never believe it but some apps on phones are very useful! There are some very helpful apps on phones and I may need to use one of them someday, you never know. If I got lost in the middle of nowhere, I could use the google maps to find my way out. Also if I needed help or someone to come and get me I could call someone close to come find me. Other Helpful apps are the clock, calculator, compass. They are all very useful! Another one is the alarm clock because you won't have to come banging on my door in the morning because the alarm will wake me up early in the morning!

Nervously I walked up to the long moldy and old jetty that looked like it was going to snap, my hairs were starting to stand up over my body. Telling myself I was going to be ok but it wasn't working. I had to do it, I had to jump otherwise my friends will call me a wuss and make fun of me.

I didn't want to do it but I found that my feet were just starting to take me in the direction of the jetty. My feet touched the moss on the side of the jetty and I shivered and jumped. But I kept going anyways. I finally slowly got to the edge of the jetty and my feet dangled over the side.

Standing there I just looked over the smooth water. A fish jumped out of the water like a frog leaping into the sky. I thought to myself I am going to be like that fish i'm going to jump in 3 2 1…

I just can`t! I told myself not to think about it and before I knew it I was in the freezing cold water bobbing up and down like a raft that someone has made. Excitingly I swam my way to the shore my feet touched the nice golden sand. When I got up the sand was all stuck in my toes I hate that feeling.

Running to the jetty I did it all again!