Literacy Reflection W7T3

Reading- This week for reading I had to read a book called A Wife For Te Ra and then I had to put all the information that I gathered into a explanation burger. I also did the rest of my household explanation and I learnt how to make my sentences more detailed.   Here is my Burger! 

This is My explanation I have highlighted the bits that I have made better to improve it. Also my next step learning was to fix up my conclusion and make it better. Here is the first piece of my writing and if you want to read more the the link